writingcamp+ Order from the heaven

It is a story of a 15 years old boy who was  very cute but a little bit handsome. He was tall and skinny and had gorgeous hair. A very major thing in him was he was afraid of after life and stories related to death and ghosts! He lived on the top of the hill with his three sisters and his bigger brother Dev in Australia.  There was an old villa on the bottom of the hill which was very mysterious and was known to be haunted there lived an old lady whom people called ghost because she was alive for about 200 years! One day Neo's dad was telling him the story of death of his brother whose soul screams at him and then he fell unconscious and woke up in the heaven. One angel askes him whether he did a mistake or he just did a very pure task that god has asked to meet him.  Neo: God wants to meet me????? Angel: Yes I am surprised too, come o let's see what's the matter. On the way when they were going to meet the God Neo(in his mind);WHAT!!!!! I AM IN THE HEAVEN AND THIS ANGEL SAYS THAT GOD WANTS TO MEET ME??????????? TOTAL RUBBISH!!!!!!!!! Neo: This couldn't be real(whispering) Angel: Did you just said something? Neo: oh no no , I didn't said any thing. Then he bought him to a glowing sun like energy, the energy said ''You are the chosen one." Neo: Chosen for what? GOD: Chosen for bringing enlightenment in the world and killing those demons who are disguised as humans and mislead them. Neo: What demons! I can't fight demons I am only a kid. GOD: Yes my child you can, if you have faith in your mind for yourself. However you are not doing it alone I will provide you with one of my most powerful warriors. You have to choose one one of them. Then five elemental warriors appeared there. Neo: Hmm a fiery man, rock skinned golem, thunder man and a man with hair replaced by grass, and oh yes its just some water manipulated as a man(sigh almost invisible). Elemental warriors in a similar voice: We will not go with this skinny wooden stick!! Neo: Wooden stick? how dare you! GOD: Just calm down Neo and you people don't you have manners of talking! Now we have to give you any other warrior, but who? Then a girly figure appeared from the white clouds. She said:-. Nez: My name is Nez and I will go with Neo. GOD: Oh goody! you are so humble my pretty girl. Now go, we don't have time to loose. Then Neo woke up and saw Samuel his dad in front of him. Samuel: Are you OK my child? Neo : Yes dad but, what happened? Samuel: You suddenly fell unconscious when I was telling the story of my brother. Oh my god it's all my fault that I told you my brother's after life's story even though I knew that you are very afraid of after life. Neo: Hmm dad I don't think that It was your fault..... I think that I fainted because of fatigue..... Ahh my head aches.... please leave me alone for sometime I need rest. Then everybody went from his room and Nez appeared. Nez: What are you doing in the bed, we don't have time to waste..... get up!!@#$% Neo: Hey my name is Neo not@#$% Neo:..... Neo touches Nez's face.... Nez: Hey are you mad what are you doing? Neo: I was just checking that if you are real? Nez: You are so dumb however take this. Neo received windy snow bracelet Neo: What is this? Nez: Whenever you will remember me after wearing this bracelet, I will come. After saying that Nez disappeared. Neo: Whoa! GOD, elemental warriors, Nez the super girl, Demons.... Samuel: Demons? what are talking about my son? Oh just forget that story you look so scared there is nothing like demons and after life!!!! Neo: Dad???!!!!! when did you came here? What did you listened? what did you saw? Samuel: Calm down honey calm down, I just heard you talking about demons that's why I was so worried about your mental health. Neo: Don't worry dad, I am ok! Samuel: Ok honey take care, I have to go headquarters now. Neo: Bye dad. Then Samuel went to the headquarters of Australian  Army( he was the army chief) Neo: I have to fetch the help of my brother Dev, he is very good in these kind of things(myth and supernatural type) Then he went to his brother's room..... Dev: Hey Neo ! look, I found something interesting! Neo: What's it? Dev flashed an ancient book with a ruby on its cover.... Neo: Whoa! it's so cool what's it? Dev: It's an ancient book scripted in Greek language, I wonder what is written on it? See it, ca you read it? Neo: No I can't because I don't know Greek. How ever the sketches and holograms drawn on it..... It looks like that it is about any kind of beast! Dev: Oh no! is it the book to call ghosts, devils and souls? Neo: Hey don't scare me! Tell me a thing, where did you find this book? Dev: Umm.... Neo: Come on say something? Dev: Ok let me tell you the truth.... I am a member of World Wide Paranormal Activity Research Organisation(WWPARO).I got a news that there is something suspicious in the old villa of Crimson Granny..... Neo: Crimson Granny????? Dev: People say her Crimson Granny because she was a very old lady and always wore crimson clothes and red lipstick. Neo: Oh..... Dev: And when I sent a team of archeologists with some police officers in that villa, they found the crimson clothes of granny and this book but no corpse or anything else of hers. Investigation is going on and nobody except me, archeologists, police and CBI are allowed to go there. Neo: But why archeologists? Dev: Because her villa is about 3000--4000 years old and she  didn't let anybody to come inside so when she was dead I don't wanted to lose this opportunity Neo: But why didn't you told anybody about that before? Dev: Dad knows already, but you guys.... I was not sure about that you people will not tell anybody else because I find some confidential information and  delicate historical things almost daily, so it might be possible that some rebellions, terrorists and pilgrims may attempt to kill me or approach me to know or get all these, that's why its important to keep my real identity secret. Neo: I have a secret too.... Dev: What's it? Neo: ..(Takes deep breath) Ok.. I don't know that you will believe me or not but I will tell you and then you will decide what's the truth because I am also confused! Neo tells dev the whole story of Heaven and the super angel girl Nez.... Dev: Its unbelievable! but where is that windy snow bracelet? Neo gives the windy snow bracelet to Dev. Dev: Wow Neo! come on! wear it and call Nez. Neo: No! I can't! If I will call her no reason then she will punch on my face. Dev: Come on just do it! Neo: Don't you understand THAT IF I CALL HER FOR NO REASON THEN SHE WILL KICK ME AT MY!@#$%& Dev: Ok I understood now don't do it!(laughing) Neo: But I don't understand one thing, that what is a book written in Greek language doing in Australia. Dev: That's the point ,how did this book crossed sea if it did so then somebody had bring it here and if not then somebody from Greece travelled here and then wrote this book in Australia. Neo: But if any Greek travelled to Australia for some reason and wrote this book then he might be only wasting its time but if he or she came from Greece to bring this book here and give it to some body else the it may be somebody's or his or hers plan for something because in that case that might be the only mission! Dev: Hey Neo try this! can you read this book! Neo: You know I don't know Greek language then why are you forcing me to attempt it! Dev: I was only asking if you could read this book but if you don't wanna even try the its okay! Neo: So you are saying that I can't read this book! I ca do anything if I want. Neo grabs the book from Dev's hand and start reading..... Neo: Whoa! its not written in Greek its written in math's symbols and physic's constants! Dev: ….. Neo: Ohh its:- theta, lambda, alpha, gamma, eureka and fi! Then suddenly a bright light glows in the center of Dev's room! A man whose whole body was burning appeared! Neo : Its the fiery who with his friends abused me in the heaven!(to Dev). Now what do you want?(to fiery man) Fiery man: What are you saying? are you mad!!?? you called me chanting those words written in that book! Dev: What ! you came because Neo said the words written in that crimson book with a ruby? Fiery man: Where's Lily? and how did you got that book! Dev: That's a long story, however Lily is dead! Fiery man: What!!! that crimson bit*h can't be dead. She uses black magic and was married to a Greek astrologer! She's very powerful she can't die very easily! however how did you know that? did you saw her corpse or any other proof, Mr. researcher? Dev: Actually no! but many people claim that! Fiery man: Ha ha ha  my soul says that she's alive and also her old husband! Dev: But what business do you have with Lily? Fiery man: She used black magic and put the fragments of souls of elemental warriors in different things so that she could control them. My soul is in the ruby on that book and I am sure that you received the windy sow bracelet from Nez it contained the fragment of Nez's soul. Dev: So what would be the best decision in regard of these objects? Fiery man: Protect them from any kind of harm because if they broke then we will be half dead Neo: But where can we find others? Fiery man: I don't know but be careful, that crimson bit*h is too dangerous. you may be challenged by many devils if you try to take those objects. Neo: Devils? are these those devils that Nez told me about? Fiery man : I don't know, Hey just call Nez by that bracelet! Neo: Ok.... Dev sees Neo with an angry look..... Then Neo wears the bracelet and calls Nez... Nez: What happened did you encountered a devil? Oh my God! Lucas! what are you doing here are you teasing Neo ? Lucas(Fiery man): No I am not but Neo found my soul fragment. Nez: Whoa! did he killed the Crimson Grannie on its own? Dev: No no she is missing from her place. there aren't any evidences of her death. Nez: Who are you?(to Dev) Dev: I am Neo's big brother. Nez: Oh you had a brother Neo!(blushing) you never told me before! Neo: Oh no Nez just go now its my order.(angrily) Nez: Yeah sure but tell me one thing why did you called me? Neo: Oh yes I wanted to know that if  the devils of which Fiery man was talking of are the same as our enemy devils? Nez: What I can't understand what are you saying? Lucas explains everything to Nez. Nez: No they aren't same Lily is one of the devils which I was taking of but what kind of devils lily have I don't know! Do you know Lucas? Lucas: No! Nez: Hmm..... we will research on it let's go Lucas! Then they both Lucas and Nez disappeared. Next morning the research team found a skeleton of a crow. some rosaries, Ancient Greek scriptures written on flat stones and dried flower petals. Dev told all this to Neo. Neo: So what does it means?(to dev) Dev: Now it is sure that Lily used black magic and was married to a Greek astrologer as per Lucas and Nez said! But I found something eve more special than my archeologist and the police inspection team! Neo: Oh what's that? another mysterious book? Dev: No! I found a map of her house. Dev give the map to Neo to see. Neo: Whoa! its not a map of house but its a map of a city! Dev: That's what she was hiding and that's why she refused to sell her house to the govt. even for such a high cost. Neo: Are we going to explore the house! Dev: But how's that possible because I don't wat to share this information with anyone because nobody will believe me and also they will snatch the book and bracelet from us! and if these went in wrong hands the there might be a little problem! Neo: So what's the solution?  Dev: He he he he we will dig a hole on your room's floor. Neo: What nonsense that doesn't makes even a little bit of sense! Dev: Yes it does! Crimson granny's house is on the bottom of the hill and ours is on the top so we have to dig the floor of your room because it is on the ground floor and when we will reach the bottom of the hill the we will take a sharp turn towards the granny's secret basement. Neo: Ok but who will dig that hard so we could reach the bottom of he hill! Hey! Oh yes you can arrange a digging drill by ordering your team crew! Dev: No! I can't! Neo: but why? Dev: Because these kind of things seems to be very dangerous ad I don't want my team members in any kind of danger. Neo: So how will dig that hard so we could reach the bottom of the hill? Its impossible! Dev: No its not just call Nez and Lucas they will help us! Neo: Oh yes I just forgot about them! Then Neo calls  Nez and Lucas. Lucas: What happened did you found the monsters? Neo: Ahh No! Dev: We just wanted to know that if you both could dig a tunnel for us to reach the villa of Crimson Granny? Nez: But we don't have powers that match this task! Lucas: Yes for this we need Golem! Neo: Oh that rocky dude whom I met in the heaven? Lucas: Yes Neo. Dev: But how will we find the Golem? Nez: To get the help of golem we need to start walking and then stop when we reach the same place where we started walking. Dev: Whoa! you mean a world tour? Lucas: Yes and as gift you will get three boons from the earth trio. Neo: What's an earth trio? Lucas: The trio of Golem, Mariana and Jerky is known as earth trio! Neo: But it will take a lot of time to travel this far on foot! Lucas: Yes but there is a short cut created by Lily! Neo: Created by her? Lucas: Yes! she captured and controlled all of us by capturing our soul fragments in some magical objects and I am sure that she also created the soul fragment of Golem and its hidden somewhere very close to the earth. Neo: But how did Nez got her soul fragment? Nez: I snatched it from that @#$% granny! Neo: Wow you are so powerful Nez!(laughing) Nez: Yes I am! Dev : Yes yes but where could we find the soul fragment of Golem? Lucas: As I said earlier somewhere near to the earth or a rocky substance. Neo: OK  we will try to find it and also you two will! Lucas and Nez: Yes yes we will! And then Lucas and Nez Disappeared to find the fragment and after five days Lucas and Nez found a cave in Mangrove Forest of Australia supposed to be connected with Greece by an underwater tunnel. Then they both went to Neo to tell him. Nez tells Neo the whole story. Neo: Wow its amazing, but why didn't you both went into the cave and checked the myth if it is correct or not? Nez: Because you only ordered us to find a clue that could help us find the soul fragment of Golem but not to investigate it!   Neo: Ok ok I order you both to investigate whether it is safe to go in that cave or not? Lucas: I will not listen to your command because Dev found my soul fragment not you! Neo: Ahh not again! where is Dev???? Dev: Then I order you Lucas to listen each and every command of Neo. Neo: Bro! Dev: Yo! Lucas: Damn it @#$%!!!!!! Nez looked at Lucas surprisingly. Dev: Ok then we don't have time to lose hurry up! we have to reach the Mangrove Forest as soon as possible! Then they all reached the Mangrove Forest near that cave. Neo: Eek! this cave looks spooky! Dev you should go first and see whether it is safe or not? Nez: I will go and see come on Lucas come with me. Lucas: Ok. Then Nez and Lucas went inside the cave to inspect. Many hours passed but they didn't came out! Neo and Dev became worried about them. Neo: Hey Dev why aren't they coming out? Dev: I don't know, come on let's see! Neo became scared but Dev was confident. Then they both went inside the cave and a scary sound entered their ears. It was like "Ha ha " it was Lily who had captured Nez and Dev. Neo: OH MY GOD WHAT SHOULD WE DO NOW DEV?????? Dev: I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                            TO BE CONTINUED.....