The Golden Wolf

I would like to address a few things on my books xx 1.. I am NOT a professional writer, I am only learning still at the moment and I understand that my work is not up to that standard yet.. 2.. I also struggle with grammar greatly and hope you can understand that I am not doing it to piss anyone off.. I do really struggle with the Their and there ect.. Your and Your've ect .. The writing platform also uses American style spelling checks so sometimes that effects things. I also failed the grammar side of English and I am wanting to go back to collage to learn it all over again but due to covid I cant yet as I need to be in collage for the extra tutorage that I need one on one... So again I have to wait and so you will all have to wait for that part of my writing to improve.. 3.. Most of the writers on Dreame and aspiring writers and not professionals .. We try our best and don't have people that edit or proof read or anything like that.. Most of us do read through our own work.. I know I do.. Many times .. We are trying our best and sometime when people start with the very negative comments it can effect us badly.. It takes a lot to put our work out there for everyone to read and when you tear it apart please think about the word you write.. This is also one of the reasons I needed some time off as my first book has had 100s of amazing comments but a few people have torn my work apart, Brutally and I wasn't ready for someone to do this.. It nearly got to the point where I no longer wanted to write. I hope I have addressed a few issues people have mentioned and gave you all a little insight to the writers side of things .. Happy reading and I hope you can over look my grammar and enjoy the stories I am trying to bring to life xx  “Jamie Jamie wake up... The packs under attack and your father's fighting with the Rouge King! I need both of you to run now!... They have set the pack house on fire! You can't stay here it's not safe.” My mother was shouting and shaking me awake... As my senses start to come alive, I could smell the smoke and see the flames licking up the side of my bedroom door... jumping from my bed I try to control the flames, I stand and show my hand to the door, Close my hand into a fist, To try and reduce the flames simmer, Then to an ember and finally they go out...  “Mum! Carl can help the pack fight and I can keep the pack house from burning!” I say “No, Goddess no!!! ... He will know your here. He wants you, Jamie! I've mind linked your uncle Nile, He is going to meet you and Carl to take you to the Silver pack! “Mum says, using her Luna command on us for the first time, all while grabbing the spare backpack, that we keep fully stocked with a change of clothes for us, Food and water ready to just grab at any time in case of emergency.... Me and Carl are non-identical twins, we both shifted into our wolves early and new to always be prepared for anything. We knew we was special, most wolves shift at 17 but we did it at 15 and I became the gold wolf. Being the gold wolf came with powers to control fire and water as well as to heal others, we did not know if I would get more as I aged. Only 1 is born every 100 years and this is also why we shifted when we did. We need the extra time for training that other wolves did not get. We shifted and ran. "It’s about a 5hr run, let’s go" I linked Carl. As wolves we have the ability to talk to each other through our minds which we all call 'linking'. Sky and Dean (mine and Carl's wolf) run for their lives making it in 4hrs. As we came to the border, we caught sight of Uncle Nile, although we wasn't expecting to see the scene we can see in front of us now. He is on the floor crying as we both shifted back into our human forms. We instantly felt the link to our pack and family snap. “NOOOO!" I scream out and collapse towards the ground. Carl catches me before for I land and holds my shaking body tight in his arms. Uncle Nile tells us mum was in the middle of linking to him, telling him we had left and was on our way. That we should be there within the next hour. She did not know we had made it in record time. She was saying that the King was winning and not to send the back up as they would not arrive in time. She did not want more men running to their deaths, trying to save our pack. That was when the Alpha and Luna died, (mum and dad). We gasped as just then, both me and Carl can feel the Alpha power of our family, Rushing into us. The power was immense, but the heart break was agony.  “They’re gone! We should have stayed to help them. We were training for this! Why didn't they let us stay? She ordered us away Uncle Neil, And Luna command so we couldn't not obey her!” Shouts Carl, He shouts out into the night not really directing the questions at anyone.  “No son, please understand her reasons, if she allowed you to stay, we could have lost the pair of you. You know what Jamie is and what she will be capable of in the future... Can you image the damage he could inflict if he had got his hands on her? He would have use her to take over all the packs, Across this land! He would have made himself a King! Come with me, like your parents wanted and we will go to my Alpha. I will explain everything to him, and he will accept you into this pack. I am the warrior trainer here and tomorrow both of you will start your training with me. I will train you in all styles of combat and then together, you can take him down... Together! You both will destroy the bastard!... Jamie, you have the power to make him suffer for everything he's done, And the innocent lives he has taken.” Uncle Nile lifts me up into his arms as he speaks, trying to comfort me. Carl walks at the side of us and I realise how small am compared to these two, I’m 5”3 and I feel so small against my uncles 6” ft frame. He pulls me closer to him as I just sob and sob out my pain and loss, till eventually, I pass out from the exhaustion of it all...