Possessive twin mates

Hi author here  This story is going thru some major editing right now so it things don’t add up or there are things missing it’s because of that.  I started writing this story originally in my notes section on my phone years ago when I was little so things didn’t make sense or things didn’t stick. I hope I can correct anything you didn’t like and I hop I can get more people to read as I edit it.  Please use this comment section to tell me what to improve and what to add or what to take away.  Tell me which chapters you want me to chance and tell me how you want me to do it   For example if you want me to add more of people or if you want me to take a character out of this book as I am willing to do that to make this story better. Hopefully by the end of all my editing everything is way better. Thank you for your patience.