fan-fic yule ball

Hey! Brightwit here! Just letting you know that I am a novice writer so don't expect long chapters or superb wording and punctuation! thanks! Brightwit waved goodbye to her Mom and walked to platform 9 3/4 with Star. Brightwit had a strong urge to grab Star's hand, but in the end she did not grab it. When they got on the train, they sat down in a compartment. Once they were seated, Star got out her guitar case and opened it, reavealing a beutiful golden brown guitar engraved with flowers. Star loved her guitar, she has had it for four years now it was the first thing somone had given her and that person was Brightwit. Meanwhile Brightwit got out her scketchbook and started to draw a dress when their friends, Sara and Raven walked in. 'Hey guys' said Sara. she was always happy to see them... Or anyone for that matter. 'Hey Sara, Raven'. Said Brightwit 'Yeah... Hey whatcha workin on Bri?' Said Sara while looking at Brightwit's scketchbook 'Nothing!' Said Brightwit. 'Uh-huh' Said Sara. Sara had guessed that Bri liked Star, so, she let the subject drop. They ended up playing exploding snap with Star's guitar playing in the background. When the train finaly stoped they left to go to the carragies, spliting up because there was only room for two in each carrige. So Sara and Raven took one carrige and Star and Bri took the one behind it. Once they were all in the great hall Raven went to the Slitherin table, Sara the Gryfindor and Star and Bri the Hufflpuff table finding two seat open next to eachother they sat down and waited for the headmaster to speak. 'Welcome! let the feast begin!' After Star and Bri had eaten they went to the Hufflepuff common room Star got her guitar out again and played for a while. 'Hey Bri?' Said star Bri did not awnser, she was too wraped up in her scketch to notice and scince Star hardly talked to anyone but Bri this was a BIG feat 'Bri? Bri?' 'Oh... Yeah, sorry what were you saying?' Said Bri when she finaly noticed Star's attempt at getting her attiention. 'I was saying that you have never been so wrapped up in a dress.' 'Oh... Yeah this one is special' ' Who is it for?' 'Uhhh.... Somone very dear to me I guess.' Said Brightwit 'Oh ok' Said star feeling slightly put out because Bri would not tell her who the dress is for. 'Night' Said Star as she walked to the girls dormitories.