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  • Kidd17 3 years ago
    Scene: Petra's Trailer Character: Petra and Claudia. "Petra we need to talk!" Petra approaches Claudia who was standing in front of his trailer's door, "where are your kids? Do they already sleep?" He shook his head, "I lose, she and her new girlfriend hashed" Claudia pat Petra's shoulder and smiles, "we need to talk, Petra" Claudia took a deep breath and looked at him, "I can't divorce him," Petra looked at Claudia. "Wh-what do you mean, Claudia?" Claudia sighed, "he found out about our relationship, Petra, I'm sorry, We shouldn't..." Petra shook his head, "no, I won't! I love you, we can do this together" Claudia shook her head, "no, I can't" Claudia harshly walks to Petra's trailer door, and she never looked back
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  • AM World 3 years ago
    thank you so much
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  • Cryptic_Nyx 4 years ago
    Thank You so much, although I'm still stuck developing the main plot and is having trouble incorporating certain scenes.
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  • Mariam Abdulhay 4 years ago
    Creo que una buena historia debe incluir varias tramas pero no exagerar en la cantidad porque eso sólo puede terminar de dos formas: odiado por el lector o amado por el mismo.
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  • pennielayn 4 years ago
    "Cole!" My father's thunderous voice boomed from behind me. I was glad at that moment the elevator door had already shut taking Macy up to our suite. Turning coldly I could see my father's face contorting with anger. "What?" I didn't care to be respectful at this point. I didn't even care that we were in the lobby of the hotel with dozens of onlookers. "Don't "what" me boy. You know what! I told you I didn't want that trash coming to your sister's rehearsal dinner, let alone the wedding. You just think you can waltz back into this family like nothing happened and parade the trash around?" his words were striking a nerve. My hand clenched into fists at my sides. I wanted to strike him more than anything, but I would not do that for my sister's sake. "Do not father. I am not making a scene right now for Abigail's sake, but so help me old man I will not hesitate to knock you on your ass if you continue to insult my date." My teeth were gritted, my heart was hammering in my chest. I could see he knew I was serious. He was to old to fight me. As people started to stare he looked at me with menace. Giving an evil huff he turned on his heel and walked out. Leaving me fuming. I knew this wasn't over. Not by a long shot. I would deal with that later. Right now I wanted to be near her but I needed a drink. Well a few drinks. I walked over to the concierge and requests a few bottles of alcohol be brought to my room. I then turned and made my way to the elevator.
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