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THE UNKNOWN

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The story has to do with another planet in which life exists almost as we know her in Earth. The only difference is the fact that in this place are also living some mythical creatures. I will describe how the societies have organized and also the war that is coming with the clan of Fa-Lima, creatures with human body but with four hands and legs and also a deformed face. The name of this planet is Dounai and his secrets are waiting for you to discover them.

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THE BEGINNING
 We all know the life in earth, but it is not the only one that exists in this universe.Thousands light years ago into another galaxy, there is a planet, which name is Dounai and the only thing that this two planets are having in common is the fact that humans are living in both of them. The big difference although is that in Dounai are also living many mythical creatures but the only form of society that exists is in the country of Anord  The most important of those creatures is the race of Fa-Lima, which by the beginning of life and for many years managed to rule this land.Their characteristics are very weird and they have nothing to do with anything that anyone has ever even imagine. To be more precise they are measuring more than two meters, with a human body and four legs and hands. Their face were ugly and they had an earring in their nose and they also were bold with only a plait in the back of their heads  As i mentioned they ruled the Planet of Dounai by making the humans slaves of them, forcing them to serve by building the buildings that they were needed and by forging their weapons. Fa-Lima's were taking and using all the resources and the food that Dounai were providing and the human race had nothing for them to use.Many times even the food was a luxury.  Fa-Lima's had for God a huge weird lizard that could fly and his name was Kent. That lizard was the only creature that could speak the language of humans and communicate with them, mainly to order them or to remind them that they were born to serve the ultimate race of Fa-Lima.  One day the Humans decided to resist once and for all. They were secretly stole many swords and spears from their conquer and hide them into a lair until the time that they would attack. They organized their plan for months because they wanted the attack to be fatal. A week before the rebellion starts the leader of this mutiny, which name was Mexel, went to the lair with the company of three more rebels in order to take the hidden weapons and to begin the revolution.But in the entrance of the cave the view were scary and Mexel saw something that could not believe.  A creature half lion and half men were standing in front of the entrance. Thinking that this might be the last chance to earn the freedom of the humans, Mexel approached near the lair, he looked into the eyes and told him "i don't want to hurt you, i just want to take what is inside in this cave'' , the creature responded with a a loud voice '' even if you would, you couldn't'' and fifty more started to coming out of the cave.''We are the race of Intarus and my name is Kentar. We used to hide to avoid the conflict with the Fa-Lima's. But when we saw you approaching this place and hiding the weapons, a thought came to my mind. You are preparing a revolution and we would like to be part of it''.  Mexel started to thinking if he could trust the Intarus to help them. He went near to the Kentar and told him '' why should i trust you? How do i know that you won't betray me?'' Kentar touched his hair and by laughing he whispered ''If i wanted to betray you, my friend, you wouldn't have found me in this entrance, but the leader of the Fa-Lima's. Instead i am here offering you a chance to take this land from those barbarians and start a new civilιzation in which humans and Intarus could live together in harmony and throwing them away. What do you think? ''.  By hearing the words of Kentar, the human was thinking that this might be one very good opportunity to get rid of the Fa-Lima's once and for all. They agreed and immediately Mexel started to explain the plan in the leader of Intarus'' it is very simple. when the night falls we will approach the kingdom of Fa-Lima's and we will slay the guards all around. After that we will sneak in the area that we are living and in completely silence we will give the weapons to the others. of course we would be fools to open a fair war with them so we will try to surprise them by killing them in their sleep. One of our race, when we will have kill the most of them, will start a fire and we will burn them alive. To be honest you are not in my plan but i am sure that we will find a way to help. First of all do you know how to use a weapon?'' Kentar laughed and answered to Mexel ''Of course we know how to use a weapon. Also we are masters on using our bows''. The humans stared at the bow's of the Intarus. They had never see a weapon like this. ''So'' Mexel told '' you could finish them of when they will try to escape''. ''I could not agree more with you my friend'' responded the Kentar and together they started to marching in the kingdom of the Fa-Lima's.  The rebels arrived, with the unexpected company, and they started to count how many guards they were guarding. They saw five in the front door, three in both sides, another five in the back place and three upstairs in the fortress. Total sixteen guards. Mexel got discouraged and told to the others'' even if we managed to kill the guards in front there are three in the up frieze. There is no way to do this without someone of them see us''. Kentar understood that he might had the solution to this problem and answered ''If i could kill at the same time both of those three guards would you and your men be able to silently kill the others?'' then Mexel who seemed to found his courage again answered to his new friend ''Let's do this''  And so it happened, Kentar and three of his men aimed in the head of the upstairs guards and immediately killed them without anyone noticing anything. ''Now it is your turn to do your part'' told Kentar to Mexel and the humans started to sneaking in order to kill the rest of the guards. First they attacked in the front side and they automatically took the heads of the enemies. Then Mexel took the bag with the weapons and told to the companion '' I will go to arm the others and prepare them for war. Klar, Malas and Cortus go to finish the rest of the guards''. The three companions that he order knew that they would manage to do the job without a problem.  Mexel started to march as slowly as he could to the others when he heard footsteps in front a him. He understood that a warrior of Fa-Lima's was there and automatically left the bag and grabbed again the sword in his hand in order to attack. He started to running to kill the warrior, but, unfortunately he saw him and managed to also get his sword. The human started to attack but the fight was too difficult. Mexel managed to injury him but, finally the monster put him down.Right before he stab him and take his life, an arrow passed from his head. It was Kentar.He looked at Mexel and told him '' You owe me nothing, now go fast and give the weapons before everyone wakes up''. So it happened, the human started to run with the bag and he finally entered in the area of humans where they were waiting him  When the arms had been delivered to most of the humans Mexel started to explain about the Intarus to the others '' We can trust them, i am sure about them. Also one of them just saved my life a minute before a guard take her for ever''. In that minute the rest of the companion showed up. ''It is time to begin the plan'' Klar said.  For more than two hours the men were slaying quietly all the warriors of Fa-Lima's who were sleeping and they could never imagine that something so small and useless in their eyes could ever do something like that. More of the half were already dead and then Mexel told to Klar '' It is time to fire them up and get done with them. So the companion took a torch and after all the humans had left the kingdom he started the fire to kill them all. But the rest Of the warriors that were sleeping they were fast awake from the smell and understood that something was wrong. Immediately the ran outside of the fortress and they saw more than three hundreds men ready to fight. But they very angry with this situation and started to marching to their side thinking that they might had a chance  The truth is that few men could fight and almost none of them could stand a chance in a fair fight against those creatures.Νevertheless the Humans also raised their sword and also started the attack, But the crucial moment arrows started coming from the trees in the heads of Fa-Lima's. They started to run panicked with this situation and they headed in to the sea in order to manage to leave from this unknown attack. Few stayed alive and they took the boats, that humans were using to provide food to them, to save their life.None of them had ever passed this sea and they could not know what they had to face in this journey. ''WE WON, WE WON'' started the humans to yelling when a strong wind coming from the winds of the Kent stopped their enthusiasm. '' You have no idea what you have started you stupid humans. We will reborn from our ashes and we will destroy all of you. Mark my words, your son and your grandchildren will pay with blood what you did today. Your god is going to visit you soon and remember that it would be one of your race that would destroy you for ever. As for you Intarus learn that i knew your existence and from today you will have the same fate as those pour little humans'' The humans stayed quiet to listen to the god of Fa Lima's, instead Kentar forearmed his bow and told to Kent '' We heard enough from you lizard, time to silence for ever''. He try to kill him but Kent lost into a black hole and disappeared.  Humans stayed for a few moments without knowing what to do. When they understood that everything had done and they were free they started again to celebrate. It was only Mexel that were thinking the words of Kent "Who is the god that he mentioned and why could ever one of us decide to betray our race?''  ''You fought bravely today Mexel. We owe you everything'' Fiona told to him and interrupted the bad thoughts that he had. Kentar agreed with the beautiful lady'' I totally agree with her, your plan really worked out and you managed to break your chains''. Mexel looked at him and answered '' i wasn't alone my friend, all of us make it happened everyone helped and more of all you and the Intarus. You know very well that we wouldn't stand a chance without you. Beside that i owe you my life and i will never forget this. Klar Malas and Cortus also did a great job.'' ''I told you and before you don't have to give me anything because it was your plan that gave to our friends the right to stop hiding from those monsters. As about your companions i have to agree that they do their best. But i think we spoke enough, it it time to celebrate and try to find out if there is any wine left in the cellars of the burned kingdom.''   And so humans and Intarus started a feast to celebrate their liberty, but none of them could not predict that the problems as Kent told had just began. The next morning most of the humans started to rebuild the kingdom and also to construct some houses to live. Near in the burned buildings Mexel were still thinking the last night, when Klar approached him '' Good morning my brother, i was thinking last night that we had never see the rest of this country and we know almost nothing from the place that we are living. so what would you think if we start a journey to learn more about the world of Anord. Our hero looked him with tears in his eyes and told him '' We are free my friend. We can do everything that our hearts desire. although i am not going to leave. i will build a kingdom near the sea and hoping that some of the Intarus will stay here, i will learn with other humans, that would like to stay, the art of the war. One day the might come back again and i would like to be ready. I would advise you to do the same wherever you would like to go'' Klar touched the back of the head of his friend, he kissed him in his forehead and told him '' Farewell brother. I would never forget what we managed to do here today. May the fortune be always at your side''   Only one hundred of humans decided to stay in this area and help Mexel build this fortress in which first goal would have been to be a great warrior. The name of this new kingdom will be Kouragos. The rest of the humans, among them the three companions Klar, Malas and Cortus started to heading North in order to explore the rest of the country. A few miles away from Kouragos they found an area foul of beautiful creatures similar enough with our horses with only difference that they all had three tails and a horn in the middle of their head. The humans were surprised because they had never seen something like that. ''I could build a kingdom here'' Klar thought '' we could co exists with those beautiful creatures and why not also learn how to fight on them. Kentar could help us on that.'' And like that the Klar found many people that liked the idea to stay in this area not only because of the Capals  (that's how they named this weird kind that they met) but also because by choosing this area they would be near to our friend Mexel if something happened. Klar named this kingdom Kabal. Malas and Cortus were now the only rebels that started the hole revolution some nights ago.  The journey were long weeks have passed and the Intarus and the humans continued because they wanted to see as more as they could. Suddenly one morning they arrived into a place that could not even imagine. A hole city empty of residents and ready for the new people that would like to stay. Malas immediately thought that this might be a great chance to stay because he was already away enough and might the things be dangerous in the continue of the journey. Only fifty people agreed with him to stay in this place and the rest after stayed for a few days to rest they continued to travel across the country of Anord. This new kingdom was named by the Malas, Ilmour and would have the worst fate of all the others.The last companion with two hundred people went even Norther. The temperature had changed and as they were marching they found a huge flat country with many of trees and flowers. '' This is the last station for me my friend. I think that the Intarus will be perfect in this spot but if anyone desires to continue he can do it of course'' Kentar said and indeed the most of them stayed in this valley witch was named the Valley of the Intarus.  This trip was ready to over. As they were walking and learning new places, animals and plants Cortus and the rest of the humans found a forest and they decided to visit it in order to learn and see even more things. After they were walking more than 4 hours Cortus felt into something that would change the life of the humans forever. He felt into an egg. He started to look at it and he hasn't ever seen something so beautiful in his hole life. The choice to keep it was really easy for him. After many hours of marching they ended up in the start of a mountain.'' we are doomed'' a voice told'' not only we have nothing more to see but the temperature is also very slow and we cant living like nomads for ever.'' But Cortus knew already that they had a treasure in front of them they just didn't know it yet. " This is the place that we will build our kingdom. We will take advantage of this mountain and we will build something like fortress with many places inside it where we will be able to shoot any possible enemy.'' By hearing these words one of the human answered to Cortus'' We have no idea how a bow works and you are planning to base all of our defense on it?'' '' Of course we have no idea, but our friends Intarus could really help us with that. Beside that we have an egg that we might have a strong ally in there.'' In the end everyone ended up that he had a really good plan and the fourth and last kingdom was borne and his name was Seka  Just like that a country that had nothing more than some monsters- conquers in a small part of her is now having four kingdom from side to side, each one of them with a special and different ''character''. Despite the fact that the life has continued the four friends Mexel, Malas, Klar and Cortus are still remembering the threat of the Kent and they were sure that it was not just an empty threat. Mexel also could not forget the things that heard about a God. He could not know that really soon he will meet him!  

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